dinsdag 14 oktober 2008

What is a stock market? No idea!

Many pupils haven't got an idea of what a stockmarket is or what is happening in banks. They will get the chance to improve their knowledge of some important financial topics and they will learn how to build up their own career. The plan for this project includes lessons that will be rather practical. The training is not only available for pupils, also adults who have a low level of skills in banking are invited to be there.
http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/uk_news/education/6283708.stm

Timothy De Smet

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Many pupils haven't got an idea of what a stockmarket [stock market] is or what is happening in [with banks or in the banking industry] banks. They will get the chance to improve their knowledge of some important financial topics and they will learn how to build up their own career. The plan for this project includes lessons that will be rather practical. The training is not only available for pupils, [but] also [for] adults who have a low level of skills in banking are invited to be there.

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