Internet banking is a great thing, but this is no longer the case when Malware steals your money while you’re online. The Trojan URLzone displays a wrong amount of money and steals away a part of your account. Today the infection mainly strikes German internet users. Currently about 6.400 people are infected by the virus and money has been stolen from hundreds of them
Marije Laureys
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1 opmerking:
Generally, good flow. You could introduce 'Trojan URLzone' by writing: One such malware is Trojan..., which displays... This strengthens the link with the previous sentence and labels what follows as an example of your general starting statement.
'Steals away' should be 'steals'
I like the use of Today and Currently for the final two sentences.
Mind that in English, full stops become a comma in numbers: 6,400
Decent effort
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