As we all know we are experiencing the worst crises since The Great Depression, better known as The Crash of Wall Street in 1929, several specialists are convinced that the worst part still has to come. Despite the fact that the world economy is trying to recover from the first wounds of the crises, many specialists predict a new period of difficulties, especially now when everything isn’t growing as fast as they presumed. Recent sources indicate that the crisis will have a bigger effect on the world and the daily life of the common people as they lost all their confidence in the financial world. Especially in America, that’s why the specialists predict a faster growth of the economy in Europe.Charlotte Ingels
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1 opmerking:
S1+S2: crisis; crises is the plural form
S1: second part (several specialists...) is poorly linked to the , probably to keep the 4 sentence limit.
S2: final part: 'they' is best replaced by a passive construction:...isn't growing as fast as expected.
S3: Recent sources: Recent estimates from various sources...
S3: ... the financial world; better the world of finance
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