The credit crunch has not been over yet, the IMF and the World Bank expect that still a lot of risks will harm the economy. The IMF anticipates that the unemployment in the euro area will increase almost 12% until 2011. The World Bank asked to help the developing countries to stimulate their domestic demand so they can also evolve to a more stable economy. The banking institutions have their annual meeting on 6 and 7 October where they will look for further solutions for the credit crunch.
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Maggelien De Smul
1 opmerking:
Focus is clear (IMF, WB and the economic crisis), yet the text confuses at times.
Tense use in S1: is not over yet
abrupt link in S1: change the comma into a colon: ... is not over yet: the IMF...
S2: unemployment (not 'the' unemployment)
detail: S2: euro zone (more common than euro area)
S2: unclear: will increase to 12% or by 12%?
S3: unclear: The World Bank asked donor countries? asked third world countries? was asked to?
S4: unclear: the banking institutions (IMF and WB or national banks?) Strictly speaking, the IMF is not a bank.
The potential confusion makes this post below par.
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