The supermarket Delhaize decreases her prices for the second time this year. Delhaize wants a bigger market share and it wants also to become more than ever the strongest value leader of the Belgian market. The consumers find the price falls again in 3 strategic assortments: in the national and the Delhaize trademarks, in the '365' products and in the baby products. Around 150 products of Delhaize, including 70 products of the '365' trademark, are cheaper than a few months ago.
Bram Heremans
Source: http://www.nieuwsblad.be/Article/Detail.aspx?ArticleID=DMF01102009_009
1 opmerking:
Accuracy:
title: Delhaize's
S1: supermarket retailer/chain
S1: her --> its
S2: it also wants to become, more than ever,...
S3: awkward use of 'again'
S3: drop 'the' before 'baby products'
Clear message and flow, but too many accuracy errors. At this level, your text should be flawless.
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