Gold prices reached a record due to secret meetings, between Gulf Arab states, China, Russia, Japan and France, who consider using a basket of currencies to trade oil instead of the US dollar.
Gold is 'the ultimate currency' and every time when the dollar's role as the world's reserve currency is loosing its status, it take advantage of it. Oil prices also went up as the dollar's status weakened. The secret meetings appears to have no foundation, but gold prices stay close to record levels.
Emmy D'Haeye
1 opmerking:
Accuracy:
Title: make gold price rise
S1: no comma between 'meetings' and 'between'
S1: Arab Gulf States
S2: losing
S2: it takeS advantage (drop: of it)
S4: meetings appear to have...
Flow: keep the sentences about the secret meetings together to increase flow.
Too many basic errors at this level.
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