Banking firms are showing signs of recovery, the business volumes are increasing for the first time since the beginning of the crisis, but they still have a long way to go. Banks are feeling a boost in confidence over the last few months, caused by the impact of tougher regulation in the banking sector. The Financial firms are also feeling an impact of the stabilization in the housing market and in the service sector. But this first signs of recovery in the financial sector has still a long way to go, because the future demand is still a major concern.
Jan Devillé
1 opmerking:
Good job: single focus through the use of synonym subjects. However, this could lead to stereotypical phrases. You can avoid this by keeping the sujects but placing another element at the beginning of the sentence.
e.g. S2: Over the last months,...
Accuracy:
S3: are feeling... better 'feel'
S3: THE impact of the stabilization
S4: THESE first signs
S4: ... still have
S4: because future demand is still a major concern
Too many accuracy errors. At this level, your text should be flawless.
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