PricewaterhouseCoopers started a survey and concluded that financial firms are recovering but also that the most important concern is future demand.
First of all, the confidence from the banks are experiencing an upswing and is the result of the impact of a tougher regulation.
On the other hand, difficulties with funding were the cause of a feeling of downbeat in the prospects of the building societies and the profitability was broadly flat but in the current quarter, the survey expected a resumption of declines.
Finally, also the security traders and the service sector increase in value and especially the purchasing managers of the sector knows the first expansion in two years.
Lynn Hinnens
1 opmerking:
S2: are experiencing should be 'experience'
S2: upswing which is the result... OR resulting from...
S3: wordy: the cause of a feeling of downbeat in the prospects of...
S4: purchasing managers of the sector + plural verb
S4: don't use 'know' as in Dutch 'kende een groei'
Overall, the post is an effort to summarise a source text and in doing so loses focus a bit. The effort to structure the post using linking words is commendable.
As a blog post, the lack of an apparent single focus decreases its efficiency. As for linking: decent effort.
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