Due to the economical crisis Britons are saving up to 1.7% more of their income. However economics are worried about this turnaround because the recovery of the recession depends on consumer spending. Also the UK’s building societies suffer heavily from the household savings. British people have the right to fear the crisis and save their earnings but in order to recover from the recession they should not feed their piggybanks to much.
source : http://www.bankingtimes.co.uk/01102009-household-savings-ratio-increases-to-5-6/
Kirsten Gabrio
1 opmerking:
Economical is not the same as economic (crucial mistake for a student of economics: never ever do this again)
However,
economists are worried
too much
Too many accuracy mistakes: at this level, your text should be flawless.
Clear focus on one topic: good job.
The link between sentence 2 and 3 is bit abrupt.
Nice way of coming full circle in the last sentence and refer back to the title: good stylistic move.
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