What about belgian single-parent families and aged people in times of crisis? They live in poverty and because of that they search for help to satisfy their basic needs. Food aid is one of the solutions to help them survive and more than 113,000 people make use of it, that is one person in every hundred. It is because of this large attendance that the food bank keeps another collection of food in the Delhaize-stores.
Lynn De Winter
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Accuracy:
title: shouts
S1: Belgian
Style: clear single focus. Good question to start and intrigue.
S4: attendance: too formal, better 'large demand'
Sometimes wordy structures:
S2: and because of that they... 'they live in poverty and consequently need help to...
S3: It is because of... 'To meet this large demand, the food banks...
Try and reduce wordiness and mind accuracy.
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